I see that in-depth critiques are discouraged, so if this seems like one, I sincerely apologize. I'm just not one for the "OMG, l33t!" comments.
I see others mentioned the comparison to Anubis, so I won't go there. Although I also thought of Borus, the other Egyptian god - but simply with the name. Yes, the style in which he's designed is Egyptian, but to me, it gives him a presence and air of authority because of it. If he were my headmaster, I'd be a straight-laced student, that's for sure! Nicely done! I look forward to seeing it colored.
I actually didn't mean for him at all to be modeled after any Egyptian god... I just was studying the elements in Chemistry at the time and thought "Boron" would be a nice name for an authoritative figure in my story.